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Grammatical changes for pill 08

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Robert James Hernandez 2020-02-19 19:00:45 -08:00
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<para>
In the previous pill we packaged a simple .c file, which was being
compiled with a raw gcc call. That's not a good example of project. Many
use autotools, and since we're going to generalize our builder, better do
it with the most used build system.
compiled with a raw gcc call. That's not a good example of a project. Many
use autotools, and since we're going to generalize our builder, it would
be better do it with the most used build system.
</para>
<para>
<link xlink:href="http://www.gnu.org/software/hello/">GNU hello world</link>,
despite its name, is a simple yet complete project using autotools.
despite its name, is a simple yet complete project which uses autotools.
Fetch the latest tarball here:
<link xlink:href="http://ftp.gnu.org/gnu/hello/hello-2.10.tar.gz">http://ftp.gnu.org/gnu/hello/hello-2.10.tar.gz</link>.
</para>
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<screen><xi:include href="./08/hello-nix-rev-2.txt" parse="text" /></screen>
<para>
Finally! We got a very simple description of a package! A couple of
remarks that you may find useful to keep understanding the nix language:
Finally! We got a very simple description of a package! Below are a
couple of remarks that you may find useful as you're continuing to
understand the nix language:
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<para>
We assigned to pkgs the import that we did in the previous expressions
in the "with", don't be afraid. It's that straightforward.
in the "with". Don't be afraid, it's that straightforward.
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</para>
<para>
Out of this we managed to create a generic builder for autotools projects,
and a function <code>mkDerivation</code> that composes by default the
common components used in autotools projects instead of repeating them
Out of this pill we managed to create a generic builder for autotools
projects, and a function <code>mkDerivation</code> that composes by default
the common components used in autotools projects instead of repeating them
in all the packages we would write.
</para>
<para>
We are feeling the way a Nix system grows up: it's about creating and
composing derivations with the Nix language.
We are familiarizing ourselves with the way a Nix system grows up: it's
about creating and composing derivations with the Nix language.
</para>
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