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Alexander Groleau 6cd0c3de72
Merge pull request #748 from fricklerhandwerk/add-links
clean up detailed explanation on building VMs
2023-10-09 08:08:14 -07:00
Alexander Groleau 84bbc7c230
Merge pull request #725 from olafklingt/server-client-test
simple server client test
2023-10-09 08:07:37 -07:00
asymmetric eaded9b070
Merge pull request #746 from fricklerhandwerk/move-warning
highlight password security warning in NixOS example
2023-10-09 11:27:57 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 769cff9030 clarify detailed explanation 2023-10-07 04:21:19 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk a2a706f29d don't repeat the example contents in the instruction 2023-10-07 04:12:44 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk cd1abe532b use self-descriptive link text, imperative for instructions 2023-10-07 04:12:44 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk a1b582f33a modules are not a convention 2023-10-07 04:12:44 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 82e7185436 remove superfluos capitalisation 2023-10-07 04:12:44 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 4bcf52fe1b reword learning goal to use more keywords 2023-10-07 04:12:43 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk d59250908d remove compatibility blurb
readers don't even need to think about it, as it's encoded in the pinned
source. at best this would be a note to maintainers, but we should know
that as well.
2023-10-07 04:11:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 776d19f8e8 dedent list 2023-10-07 04:11:44 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk d876a318bc more concise instructions 2023-10-07 00:37:42 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 4b814d5d37 more precise heading 2023-10-07 00:37:27 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk e6ae1afaed highlight password security warning in NixOS example 2023-10-06 23:23:50 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin a279bfbd6a
avoid gerund 2023-10-06 23:21:20 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin 35ae4de7ca
more mundane grammar 2023-10-06 23:20:19 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 07ea1eb6b2 rework the multi-machine example
- use the same Nixpkgs release to avoid massive downloads
- continue using `pkgs.nixosTest`; the new thing is completely undocumented
- use a shorthand module; `lib` is not used
- use an empty nginx config; commented-out code is confusing
- move explanation of the test script to the end; use imperative
- add instructions to run it
2023-10-06 22:51:08 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk e5f8ca0a9d reword introduction to multi-machine example 2023-10-06 22:51:07 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 2a8bc7dd63 more concise heading 2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 256bcd47ea remove superfluos empty line 2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk f15b5a4df3 build up example as numbered list
while section headings are good for linking, this is not very important
here. the heading distract from the sequential structure, which the list
exposes more clearly.
2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 5fd6576a8d fix wording 2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 0e63b762b9 clarify wording around module options 2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 0067b57ebc remove superfluos indentation 2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 14adbcfb87 use self-descriptive link text 2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk c7dfcb7968 link to main Nix installation instructions 2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk 1ad3a3e2f8 more specific title 2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
olaf 13ca4846b2 fix wording 2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
olaf 56426054ed unrelated fixes 2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
olaf 4509761055 simple server client test 2023-10-06 22:50:45 +02:00
Lorenzo Manacorda 1dcc111a4d *: fix editorconfig errors 2023-10-06 10:59:27 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin 2bcb9da7c3
fix cross-link 2023-09-11 15:19:24 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin 668d318fe3
add technical detail
hopefully not too much
2023-09-11 15:17:16 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin 2955e01632
update note on macOS 2023-09-11 15:15:14 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin 2dfe03711d
add keyword 2023-09-11 15:14:15 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin 7a681b98ef
wording and links 2023-09-11 15:13:00 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin bfb1858a51
formatting and consistency 2023-09-11 15:08:42 +02:00
olaf 2fed480cdd pkgs = import nixpkgs {config = {}; overlays = [];}; 2023-09-11 12:22:30 +02:00
olaf 73486dd8f1 simplify used parts of default configuration.nix
move Re-run successful tests into a detais section.
2023-09-11 11:49:20 +02:00
olaf 05a570cfd5 fix title of testing vm tutorial 2023-09-11 10:59:55 +02:00
olaf 44333f7fb4 fix references heading in vm tutorial 2023-09-11 10:59:13 +02:00
olaf 5ae9aba3a5 reorder tutorials in nixos index 2023-09-11 10:56:28 +02:00
olaf 6a2a3e49de functionality of nixpkgs 2023-09-10 22:54:59 +02:00
olaf 82b206d031 fix link warning 2023-09-10 22:44:16 +02:00
olaf 9461c93af1 first reactions to comments 2023-09-10 22:24:20 +02:00
olaf 1fe25c832f Apply suggestions from code review
Co-authored-by: Silvan Mosberger <github@infinisil.com>
2023-09-10 22:23:47 +02:00
olaf 97ba15ed48 comment ref to not merged tutorial 2023-09-10 22:23:41 +02:00
olaf 62145d03d5 Apply suggestions from @fricklerhandwerk
Co-authored-by: Valentin Gagarin <valentin.gagarin@tweag.io>
2023-09-10 22:23:31 +02:00
olaf 691e4636d0 expand on nixos configuration testing
use of fricklerhandwerks review of integration test
2023-09-10 22:23:04 +02:00
Graham Christensen c703c92234
Apply review nits
Co-authored-by: Alexander Groleau <alex@proof.construction>
2023-08-25 20:31:20 -04:00