Alexander Groleau
6cd0c3de72
Merge pull request #748 from fricklerhandwerk/add-links
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clean up detailed explanation on building VMs
2023-10-09 08:08:14 -07:00
Alexander Groleau
84bbc7c230
Merge pull request #725 from olafklingt/server-client-test
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simple server client test
2023-10-09 08:07:37 -07:00
asymmetric
eaded9b070
Merge pull request #746 from fricklerhandwerk/move-warning
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highlight password security warning in NixOS example
2023-10-09 11:27:57 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
769cff9030
clarify detailed explanation
2023-10-07 04:21:19 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
a2a706f29d
don't repeat the example contents in the instruction
2023-10-07 04:12:44 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
cd1abe532b
use self-descriptive link text, imperative for instructions
2023-10-07 04:12:44 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
a1b582f33a
modules are not a convention
2023-10-07 04:12:44 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
82e7185436
remove superfluos capitalisation
2023-10-07 04:12:44 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
4bcf52fe1b
reword learning goal to use more keywords
2023-10-07 04:12:43 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
d59250908d
remove compatibility blurb
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readers don't even need to think about it, as it's encoded in the pinned
source. at best this would be a note to maintainers, but we should know
that as well.
2023-10-07 04:11:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
776d19f8e8
dedent list
2023-10-07 04:11:44 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
d876a318bc
more concise instructions
2023-10-07 00:37:42 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
4b814d5d37
more precise heading
2023-10-07 00:37:27 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
e6ae1afaed
highlight password security warning in NixOS example
2023-10-06 23:23:50 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin
a279bfbd6a
avoid gerund
2023-10-06 23:21:20 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin
35ae4de7ca
more mundane grammar
2023-10-06 23:20:19 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
07ea1eb6b2
rework the multi-machine example
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- use the same Nixpkgs release to avoid massive downloads
- continue using `pkgs.nixosTest`; the new thing is completely undocumented
- use a shorthand module; `lib` is not used
- use an empty nginx config; commented-out code is confusing
- move explanation of the test script to the end; use imperative
- add instructions to run it
2023-10-06 22:51:08 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
e5f8ca0a9d
reword introduction to multi-machine example
2023-10-06 22:51:07 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
2a8bc7dd63
more concise heading
2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
256bcd47ea
remove superfluos empty line
2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
f15b5a4df3
build up example as numbered list
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while section headings are good for linking, this is not very important
here. the heading distract from the sequential structure, which the list
exposes more clearly.
2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
5fd6576a8d
fix wording
2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
0e63b762b9
clarify wording around module options
2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
0067b57ebc
remove superfluos indentation
2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
14adbcfb87
use self-descriptive link text
2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
c7dfcb7968
link to main Nix installation instructions
2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
fricklerhandwerk
1ad3a3e2f8
more specific title
2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
olaf
13ca4846b2
fix wording
2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
olaf
56426054ed
unrelated fixes
2023-10-06 22:50:46 +02:00
olaf
4509761055
simple server client test
2023-10-06 22:50:45 +02:00
Lorenzo Manacorda
1dcc111a4d
*: fix editorconfig errors
2023-10-06 10:59:27 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin
2bcb9da7c3
fix cross-link
2023-09-11 15:19:24 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin
668d318fe3
add technical detail
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hopefully not too much
2023-09-11 15:17:16 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin
2955e01632
update note on macOS
2023-09-11 15:15:14 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin
2dfe03711d
add keyword
2023-09-11 15:14:15 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin
7a681b98ef
wording and links
2023-09-11 15:13:00 +02:00
Valentin Gagarin
bfb1858a51
formatting and consistency
2023-09-11 15:08:42 +02:00
olaf
2fed480cdd
pkgs = import nixpkgs {config = {}; overlays = [];};
2023-09-11 12:22:30 +02:00
olaf
73486dd8f1
simplify used parts of default configuration.nix
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move Re-run successful tests into a detais section.
2023-09-11 11:49:20 +02:00
olaf
05a570cfd5
fix title of testing vm tutorial
2023-09-11 10:59:55 +02:00
olaf
44333f7fb4
fix references heading in vm tutorial
2023-09-11 10:59:13 +02:00
olaf
5ae9aba3a5
reorder tutorials in nixos index
2023-09-11 10:56:28 +02:00
olaf
6a2a3e49de
functionality of nixpkgs
2023-09-10 22:54:59 +02:00
olaf
82b206d031
fix link warning
2023-09-10 22:44:16 +02:00
olaf
9461c93af1
first reactions to comments
2023-09-10 22:24:20 +02:00
olaf
1fe25c832f
Apply suggestions from code review
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Co-authored-by: Silvan Mosberger <github@infinisil.com>
2023-09-10 22:23:47 +02:00
olaf
97ba15ed48
comment ref to not merged tutorial
2023-09-10 22:23:41 +02:00
olaf
62145d03d5
Apply suggestions from @fricklerhandwerk
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Co-authored-by: Valentin Gagarin <valentin.gagarin@tweag.io>
2023-09-10 22:23:31 +02:00
olaf
691e4636d0
expand on nixos configuration testing
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use of fricklerhandwerks review of integration test
2023-09-10 22:23:04 +02:00
Graham Christensen
c703c92234
Apply review nits
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Co-authored-by: Alexander Groleau <alex@proof.construction>
2023-08-25 20:31:20 -04:00